first guy sounds real forced. voice sounds a lot liek you
dec, not into the lyrics...get to work on your writtens

second. no not into it

third...off flow, this guy is entertaining haha, in a weird way, terrible lyrics we like to pound them til they scream our name..haha

decent for an early go at it.

GET TO WORK ON YOUR PEN GAME...my advice to your bro.


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