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Better THAN You!
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IP:
This is not hate.
It was alright, lines are a little stretched and The best think you had was flow.
Really it's kind of basic. I mean the rhyme scheme was a little off, and the rhymes were all around one syllable even when you attempted multi's they didn't connect as well as they could have.
Also it was basic content, car/braggo ish. Nothing spectacular. It was alright, sounds more like an audio verse than anything.
Keep it up.
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