It's alright. The flow is hard to catch. like the beginning the flow was easy but it suddenly got harder and messed me up.

also the rhymes are simple. I know it's about a girl. but add a little wordplay to make it more interesting. or just add a couple better multi's the spice it up.

i like the content. that's straight. But work on the basic shit. like Rhymes/Flow/Multi's. and other stuff along those lines.

Keep At It.

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