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Old 01-09-08, 11:04 AM   #8
42-Keyz
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From: Chi Town
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came decent boi.. i like to use punchlines so im like, man if u could use those on some emotional shit.. itta b raw..

"ive lived a serious life so i cant smile
im just another man child
they tryna bring a man down
but i stand proud"

this was good

and the rest of the first verse..

But THIS: "youngins try..but im one niggas its hard to be"

I did not get.. lol

overall good skit boi.. dont see what beat this would goto
6/10

holla
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