ahh a little better than last time i give it a 6/10....still think this piece needed a little more work but it gots potential...gotta get more creative with the punches...but i did like that will smith shit lol...the rest were played...u got alot of spelling errors to that need to be worked on....it was hard to read your words at times cause of that....im not feelin the content either....its played... try something different to write about other than just the same mainstream shit.....keep it up ...~1~

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