Right no hate bro, i like the beat and your chorus is probably perfect serious.

But your verses did'nt fit with the track in anyway. Length of track is perfect too. Nothing really wrong with lyrics to be honest, but they do have to be adjusted slightly and maybe, well definately brought forward in alot different way of how the chorus is.

This could and probably will be an excellent track, jus make those adjustments and your there! Easier said then done but make sure you do it.


PEACE

good stuff and keep it riseing WORD.