ive lived a serious life so i cant smile
im just another man child
^ What the fuck is a manchild?
they tryna bring a man down
but i stand proud
^ basic rhyming, ok
cause when you cant smile they see no grins
so i trust no kins, and trust no friends
^ aight, but basic rhyming still
weed cost my health, i smile off my wealth,
but besides that ive lost myself
^ uh lol ok
confused cause im tryna find me
so mad i literally wish a nigga would try me
^ gay whore?
i get on my knees and ask god WHY ME!!!
^ lol.
wish i had somebody to runaway to and hide me
yeahz lol
should i be a blood and be 5 poppin
entrepreneur weed im coppin
^ quit talking about weed :\
cause when all you know is hood niggas thats the only option
^ no it aint lol
i cant smile so in the inside i cry
cocky with my style cause im fly
^ no u aint

seems like funny jokes are not funny
the oly time i smile is when i got money
^ ok lol
i cant see whats my path like havin no car lights
but when you livin a hard life...
^ what about it?...
its hard to see
youngins try..but im one nigga its hard to be
^ meh

overall just a weak piece needs more emphasis
just try harder next time and create sentences lol

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