This sounds pretty good. It sounds like you have a lot of highs in your vocals. It sounds kind of muffly. Turn down your mic when you record a little bet. Try mixing around 640 hz. See how that helps. Sounds a little choppy in some parts. Flow is on beat but you gotta draw me in this a little bit more. Lyrically your fine. But do something that'll draw me in more. Change up a little bit.

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