ok, playing, beat sample came in backwards or someshit. Im feeling this beat.

What have you done to your vocals? they sound untouched akak shit. You need dubs and adlibs aswell as alot of new mixing technics.
Lyrics sound ok, but your so monotone im honestly not even listening. you sound like your flowing on beat.

I think turn your mic down, then let loose, rap from your heart, you sound like your tryna stay loq so people in your house done hear you.

Stay dropping bro, its all about learning and getting better.