Yeah well this could be a good track, the quality is bad fucked tho......... I was liking the beat, but yeah you need that mic turned down a few touches.
You need to re-spit this when you have the right quality e.t.c but make sure you get out what your trying to say, instead of sounding like your reading from a book in school or suning.
Keep practice'n and shit and your there aight.

Peace