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Old 02-19-08, 05:55 AM   #7
Brydon
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Originally Posted by 42-Keyz
good spit.. lot of words man.. lol, good tho.. i dont know if u like punches, i do, but like cannibus just use lot of word play n some punches.. but try to use punches.. at least a couple u kno?

only thang wrong wit this piece

I am not edible, this state of mind will not eat me alive i val,
i will not meow im not a pussycat, i'll roar like a lion! well maybe just for now?

kind of stretched out, meow thing was corny to me.. lol, i dont kno

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Yeah last lines corny as fuck dude lol.........
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