keystyles are cool cos you can just go on without making sense and putting rhyme schemes together, but after you keystyle you should try taking the things you like about it and workin with it untill you get to a point were its not a keystyle and more of a focused script, i say that because there are really to many things i didnt like about this to write, and it is the fact its a keystyle in the open mic, for me i keep that in the cyphers and bring stuff i want critiqued in here...like i said not hating let that pen bleed...ya feel...peace