^I don't agree with Self. I thought the story was simplistic in vocab you were using childish rhymes and either I couldn't catch on to your flow or you didn't have one and I'm leaning toward the 2nd option. I got a verse a lot like this from a while back called "Night Terrors" and it had to deal with the devil and shit. It's very similar to this in a way yet different. We take a different storyline and twist. Care to see, I'll post it... but till then... elevate.

Plus a good way to get people to reply to your stuff is to leave a good reply to their stuff. I've seen quite a few of your replies and they're half-assed like... That was tight duke, keep it up. Out.... that just sucks and people don't respect you then or they give you a shitty reply. Consider this old saying... do unto others and you want done to you... it works... trust me

pz