i mean what can i say good...

you tryed to flow this as best u can decent...
the punches wasnt there...
creativeness was lacking...
the multis was missing...

all around to sum this up....
you need to keep droping alot more cyphers before you come to open mic...
open mic is strickly pre-written stuff u've actully worked on to show off ya skill's so if this the best u can do then this is weak and should be kept in the cypher fourm which is what got soul is trying to say....