those aint multis, and theres to much repetition, for me its better if you dont use the same word, and im not sure and i cant be fucked looking in a thesaurus or some shit but im pretty sure "intercision" isnt a word, my bad if im wrong, if it is id like to know the context, it looks like you threw this together just on the sound of "sion", for real theres some good multi tutorials out there...check em out "multi syllable rhyming" no hate i aint at the top of my game either, elevation is a life time thing ya feel...peace

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