Grade you with a PM? Shit, you have 4 posts. Is this your way of saying: "Here's some shit, I'll never look at yours, please confirm that I don't have talent"? If we all responded in a PM, this shit would get burried on Page 2 of open mic, which is frankly a nice place for it. But...

Okay, please stop denoting your fucking punches and rhymes. We read. Lyrical miracle, that's kind of played.

/ Fuck u bitch i don't ?care? /
This bar is short and... stupid.

Remember, you're not on a stereo. And Jay-Z didn't call you out... I'm not sure when your beef started. Did he say it was wrong for netcees to choose stereotypically lily-white names and proceed to whine about friggin' melonin levels? Damn him...

What's this two bars to spare shit? Is there an Open Mic bar limit now? I think you should get into the Celeb 2-Bar Diss Cypher. You can get at Jigga there...

Your piece probably wasn't as bad as your presentation made it.