Whew, this was not good guys.
I'm pretty sure I've seen liam come a lot better than this, too.
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liam:
Verse was just lazy.

"how the fuck can u call me a fucker u fucker u 2 imiture"
That's just a garbage line!
"lamins terms" "kuntuki fried chicken"
I'm sorry, but that shit has to take away from someone's credibility, doesn't it? Is that intentional?
Your flow is way off. See how the bars are so uneven?
In P Dre's longest line, it was a terrible terrible multi-line so it at least went up tempo to compensate for its length.

I really wasn't feeling any of the lines.
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P DRE:

"no not diddy it a little ditty
thicky shitty you a little picky see how many words i rhyme wiv this pricky kitty"

That's amazingly dumb. Why on earth would you include that?

"you think you a player but your just a failure
you need to go and find you saviour and do us all a favour//
i'll stab you in your vocabulary box
and watch you while you try and cough it up"

That's not too bad. Probably the piece of the battle.


"then you wont look such a fool, man you better off living in hell"
why not?:
cuz you have a knack to act a fool, you'll soon take up a spot in hell to dwell"

Just off the top of the dome. It might look longer, but I think it comes out sounding cleaner.

I'm sorry, I'm retarded, what does this mean:
"they must have been rappin in a skattle"?

you should get a job pushin carts around in a supamart//
That part of the verse is just so lousy. RHYME.

Overall... it wasn't a terrible verse. It had foundation. Plenty of prevalent newbie error.
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Unofficial vote=P DRE

Better flow. Shows a potential, I guess. I thought liam might, but after this... wtf? Elevation!