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Old 03-10-08, 12:16 AM   #8
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im Intrepid n’ steppin on methods messin ya follicles
im the prodigal prophet, vomit a sonnet on top of you


One of your best lines that I liked over the rest.
Good vocab and metaphors, I liked the multi's flow through the piece.

Keep Writing.
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