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New to RV
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Don't take any feed back from anyone negatively. It's just constructive criticism that will make you better in the long run. But yeah, you should really take your time on your pieces, put more thought, some creativity and you'll have a good piece. This peice was ok, flow was kind of everywhere, structure was off, but the rhyme shceme was getting there. I'll be waiting to you see your next drop.
Keep Writing.
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