Yo man i hear yo message, you started off well but:

"i want ya face with mine, lip lockin playin tonsel hockey
straight up not even a red light could stop me from bein with you
i aint scared to be seen with you and most def would be caught sleepin with you"

With these lines here yo completely lost me, I couldnt see no rhyin or flow at all dogg, it kept on goin that way too, maybe I just don't see it, u might have a way of linkin it up good when yo spit, anyway, I hear what yo sayin but more rhymin and better flow would make it all the better.

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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