Yeah this was a real raw piece...

....had that gritty and full on emotion to it....which brought it alive in many sense...

..i didn't get this part

Imagine that, a place with no conflict and no hurt,
But for now, let's work, towards heaven on Earth,

I mean surely heaven on earth would be a place with no conflict and no hurt, and then some...but then it seems to indicate working towards it...which makes some sense...but it just doesn't seem to fit as well as i think it could....i mean i get the heaven on earth part for sure, but it seems too giant a leap...

but still, it didn't disrupt the piece for me, would just like to clarify what you meant exactly by that...

...very nice piece...respect...