This is interesting.....you had a lot of good concepts....they just wern't delivered that well...i don't know if this is an old piece or not...but this was a decent piece...that could have been really dope had you been a more seasoned writer....keep at it....you've either got mad potential or have gotten a lot better.....i really believe that

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