Honestly, this was a really well put together peice and much better than most of the other stuff regularly put out on RV.

So many hate not being loved, but still remain to love to hate
Being hypocritical towards the one that walk their same fate

For some reason that stuck out to me, extremely.

The flow and structure was on point, but it was already mentioned i think but it did seem as if sometimes you seemed to try to be mor edeep and poetic which is good for potential but it doesnt really work if your obvious about it.

overall though great peice.

Respond to my open mics bro and keep dropping

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