1st cat a little monotone, need to sound like he feelin it more, hook str8, 2nd cat sounds better, Bill Belemy line was nyce...beat was aight nothin special to me...overall joint was str8...peace
Peep dat if ya don't mind.

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Peep dat and holla back.