overall, this was a pretty decent drop. you started off pretty simplistic, trying to build up with your multies, but once you got your momentum, you seemed to catch your rhythm. your vocab started off real basic, but got a bit more advanced as you continued.

no hate, just honest critique. none of that really took away from your o.m. though, it was still an enjoyable read bruh. keep 'em coming.

oner...


...s.v.

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