Decent take on the topic, the storyline was well planned out wasn't really feeling the internal rhyme scheme chosen because they were broken multies, but overall the piece fits the topic, not much of a flip so complexity of the piece went down only in terms of flip but the complexity of the piece itself was decent stay'd on topic pretty much well, vocabualry was real good and im a vocabulary and multi head so im only truly impressed by either or both and you got the vocabulary down so props on that, wasn't too basic nor overly exaggerated.

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