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I dont know how i really feel about this piece. in fact, i was so uncertain that i went and checked some of ya open mics in ya sig. by the way big ups on them. its obvious you have talent, but i took this as a bunch of random thoughts, which is explainable byt the fact that its a keystyle. the emotion in it was on track and it got your point across, i just feel you may have needed better word selection. an overall good drop
6.5/10
If you drop it on here as an audio, pm me the link and ill leave feed. just might need to hear it in the authors voice
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