Hmmm....feeling the flow on this real fluent, so i take that as your focal point of the piece and would go very well tracc wise, a much better thoughtout drop from your last one, more time and effort and you really did ya thing i must admit, vocabulary wasn't as expected but for audio don't really need big words ya kno, imagry was ok, emotion was pretty decent, structure well the structure of an audio drop lyrics wise will usually be different do to the fact of breathe control and flow difference no one really flows the same so i didn't have a problem with your structure. Props on the drop. I don't rate just know if i say props im impressed.

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