I wasn't feeling the multies so much because, well, it would sound stretched in a song. But this isn't audio is it?
Anyway, this was a pretty nice drop man. I was liking the emotion that you brought, but some of the concepts in what you were saying were kinda played, like the whole "I'm a broke pour ass". Hell I am too, but I live with it.
As far as vocab goes, it was decent. Nothing spectacular.
Overall, it was a nice drop man. Keep it up.