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Old 05-08-08, 02:28 AM   #26
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if you didnt bite this from another site,
its a decent verse, creative,your punches hit harder then his..
i doubt you wrote it but you get the win..
quintessental your verse was alright,decent vocabulary i liked how you rhymed capillary with vocabulary,i did that in some of my older shit..i felt like your verse was more of a filler though your punches really didnt hit..
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