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Old 05-08-08, 10:02 PM   #6
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listening,smooth,extend you vocab a little,lyrics seem real simple,your boys vocals are a tiny bit off in their tone in the beggining of the hook,
yeah id say just work on extending your vocabulary.not bad though..
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