Not bad not bad....actually its better then my SS drop on RB lmao that's for sure seeing as i didn't have time for it but you show much promise in controlling the elements of writing eventho you can strengthen your figure of speech to broaden your horizon of your piece and add that lil extra kick to it, your emotion is decent and your imagry was good. structure of the piece was decent and an overall pretty good piece.

I'll be looking for more drops by your in the near future hopefully props on the drop and i'll be seeing you in ABL pretty soon

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