soul man...
...very nice for such a short piece bruh. this was a well executed drop fam, deep shit im my opinion. you stayed on topic throughout the verse, your flow was nice, also, great description of the mood/mindstate...nice show of emotion. the vocab wasnt too complicated, but you chose the words that worked best and meshed well with the overall work.
great job homie.
keep on keepin' on brutha...
...the super