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10:23 till i'm 86
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Originally Posted by JTR
yea the beat was hard as hell and ur flow is pretty bananas and rhyme scheme is decent, but you sound too calm and shoulda sounded mad, and put more emotion like laughed at your own jokes after dissing him and work on ur punchlines when ur dissin someone ya know, but yea good shit, pc
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werd, woulda made it a lil catchier but maybe too wayne and too much like everyone else enless u got ya own stye for adlibs, idk. |