Everything is nice just try to let it flow better.. The vocab is niced but very forced and like Multie said... it takes away from it. Great concept, nice little story. I did loose focus on some parts but overall you did nicely.

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Project List

The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)

Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.