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Old 06-14-08, 10:48 PM   #10
dutch
Banned: Biting
 
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good ahead and take your time dude, i dont mind spitting first
cause it'll take more than iron man for anyone to marvel at your work
i'm confused about your name though, it has me wondering if you're worth it
hell i'm not afraid... its can you actually lay a decent verse kid
'don't try', i already knew that, i've seen enough of your whack lines
i can break open Lays faster than a party of fat guys
i did give you props though, had a few lines worth a mention
the rest was so old, half way through your verse qualified for a pension

hard hits soild.. good play off hes name...

vs

You ain't on my grade scale, so don't even try and resort bars.
I'll be rippin up and hidin F, like I'm about to get caught wit a bad report card.
Posted that highway of a verse kid, seems like your jus losin composure.
Cuz you do have miles of talent...that the rest of us are just cruising all over.

good hits and ending but you just didnt have enough to hold up agenist flight he smashed you kid no hate

vote flight
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