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Old 06-15-08, 12:33 PM   #11
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good ahead and take your time dude, i dont mind spitting first
cause it'll take more than iron man for anyone to marvel at your work
'don't try', i already knew that, i've seen enough of your whack lines
i can break open Lays faster than a party of fat guys

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Punchin right through you never showin mercy, see.
How will my punches ever land..if there STILL stuck in Flight currently.
You ain't on my grade scale, so don't even try and resort bars.
I'll be rippin up and hidin F, like I'm about to get caught wit a bad report card.
Posted that highway of a verse kid, seems like your jus losin composure.
Cuz you do have miles of talent...that the rest of us are just cruising all over.

this was a good battle.
flight dropped cool. the pension line I nearly quoted. marvel was clever, good wordplay. lays was a funny nameplay. lay a decent verse was eh. closer was eh.
lay started off nicely. the opener was a clever line, well worded n hit hard. bad report card was clever. closer was good too, i liked it. underrated wasn't good. dirt wasn't good.

came down to quotables really, n i've got lay with 1 more of them so he takes it.

cool battle

v/ lay fear
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