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Old 06-15-08, 12:53 PM   #13
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vocab was decent but the flow to me wasnt all there because when i read it and try to spit it out it didnt sound right or to exciting or noting more of a ok read it was like reading a book rather then spitting a song you feel me? no hate i thought you focus on this topic well and have well thought out bars and all but i wasnt kept into it i wasnt like WOW THAT SHIT HOT DANM more like aw thats cool no dout ok you feel me?? which means it was decent but not so good. but nice drop none the less just keep the reader more entertain aight cool stay up.
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