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Old 06-18-08, 02:57 PM   #6
Kirk
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Pretty decent battle. LP, most of your lines were okay but would have hit harder if they were worded or used differently. I thought the 10 to 12 line was funny though. But also could have been said better.

Ram, you're verse was pretty good. Kept me readin'. The whole thing was consistent and your punches hit harder. I didn't like the closer that much though. But I thought the swedish flag line was funny.

My vote is for Ramcees, punches hit harder and he was more consistent.
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