ill definitley feed this.


dude first off, this piece has done something only little pieces from r.v. have done...and thats kept me reading. this piece flowed nice..had nice vocab..though u didnt kill the verse with it...your topic was great..i like how u kept on topic..and ranged from different aspects to relinquish your meaning. the ending was perfect and loved how u rapped it up. i look foward to seeing more shit from you. keep up the good work...id deff. give this 9/10...man such a good read...stay up man

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