dick...

i have seen better from you. in some manner, the verse was a bit on the simple side (as far as technicality goes)...and i feel that you could've dug deeper within yourself to fully express what you were feeling/going through to capitalize on the power of the drop. initially you kind of robbed yourself of that. your open mic really deserved to be elaborated upon bruh. honestly, i am not going to knock this piece in the long run simply because the emotion that you did came with within it was pretty strong...i just wished that you had let us (the readers) delve deeper into your experience.

keep up the good work though playboy. you are a talented bastard...embrace your creativity. one love.


s.v.

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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.