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Old 06-22-08, 10:38 AM   #10
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rockin' a fake record, but i'll still let ya back down and concede
cause truth is he does have losses... fact is one of em was from me
bland personal
i'm way ahead of your game, and you know i'm not lying bro
cause you use to be OneStepBeyond*, but shit, that was a long time ago
straightforward but it hit ok
but really, i'm rock ya hard and show ya how to drop dope
your punches really eat Dick... so you're REALLY lucky he no showed
lmao. concept was funny, wording wasnt very good
i'll bash this trekky, my wits are faster than light, while his go beyond poor
so we all sit and laugh as Captain Kirk goes where no man has ever gone before
concept was good again. setup needed to be related to the punch. cos it wasn't the punch didn't connect cos there was no target to it
you're just on a bad course, so i'll feed ya punches again and again
cause you really are special, K... .. you never can hold your weight in the end
decent punch
seriously, you dont' have shit dude, no point creating lies
i could light half of you on fire, and it still wouldn't spark your creative side
clever concept, worded well. decent line
i'm going to let you fall here, but its a little different from what you said...
i didn't have to burn ya down man... i knew you were a push-over instead
not bad

Dude can act like beatin' Lay was legit. But he knows whats true,
Cause you don't gotta say it, DRakel. You got DR written all over you,
worded wrong. the punch was fine but the setup shoulda been directed differently
But you can't 'worm' your way outta this one. The best have tried,
And with corn row concepts? I'm quick to toss this pesticide,
corn row concepts? im not sure what that means. pesticide wordplay is played.
I'm takin' this. Those who think otherwise, thats a mistake dike,
But you'll see that I'm wright brother, just before I take Flight,
liked this. well worded n hit hard
So, please quit tossin gay lnes. I'm no tryna be mean and wrong,
But I ain't seen fruit punch this much since my senior prom,
fruit punch lines are played
Poor bitch, must look like your home got hit with mortars,
Thats why what I buy soda with, you have to use as 'living quarters,'
eh
As for your relationships. Chicks a bag of bones, saggy in several ways,
It's fucked up when you put your hand up her skirt and reach second base.
lmaoooooooooooooo. this was dope
Worst part is though. I think you bite, somethin' I can't stand, bro.
But funny. Cause even your pirated puches never land-hoe.
lol corny but funny

this was cloooose. i thought it came down to 1 line n that was kirk's second base line. that edged it his way imo.

v/ kirk
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