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Old 06-22-08, 04:55 PM   #13
El Taco
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this cats got it wrong, that ain't how it plays mister
the only chokin ya'll are gonna see is the vid i upload of me boning lays sister
^nah
fear is a straight up nerd, this geek ain't clever too
peep his name.. now realise thats what no girl would EVER do
^best bar, i laughed
this pizza face is covered in zits, he should be stringent
his face is so rocky stallone sued him for copyright infringement
^nothing special
i hate readin dudes shit, this battle ain't do or die
he named it violent text league cos his verses cause suicide
^nah
props on running the league though, keep it excitin
for the great service i'll give you a tip.. STOP WRITING
^basic, blah

nothing too special in here, one quotable

Even when we meet you your under us, used as all the vets pawn.
Cuz For-matt to be greeting anyone..it usually results in him being stepped on.
^not bad
Give it a rest dog, we ain't impressed n my flow'll be hurtin an baking you.
But u r someone to watch out' for..cuz thats the only place ya verses'll be takin u.
^didn't like this one
He's Fishin with his verses, even tho there lackin he will not stop em.
But he DOES always toss out one decent hook..that just sinks unitl it hits rock bottom.
^meh
You dont' wanna see the future, your exposed an scared to rhyme.
My entire verse is 'For'shadowing..cuz ya drop is left out in the dark compared to mine.
^nice
The flare is mine, this ain't football you can't debate your a boss.
Your style is 'Elway' though,..cuz its leadin you down a path straight for a loss
^not bad

overall i say lay takes it, he was more consistent, and his quotables hit harder... decent battle.

/layfear
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