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Originally Posted by Kirk
The OM mods didn't even feed this shit. Lol.
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How bout you name one piece i haven't left feed on...ima busy person but i'll leave feed on everything as promised.
BTW...here's ya feed.
Not bad @ all, your one of the few i've seen drop in the OM forum in a while that showed such a vivid display of writing talent with minimum flaws not saying there aren't many mistakes or too little mistakes just saying the errors made aren't really effecting the piece in a noticable negative way. Your imagry is what stood out the most outta this entire drop and in order for such imagry to be controlled as you did your word choice had to be selective and you've done a damn good job with your vocabulary (Ima Vocabulary Type Of Guy), emotion was real good, rhymescheme and structure was alright, vocabulary wasn't complex but neither was it basic, really worth the read and if the OM Forum would be more ACTIVE i would have placed your piece in the Hall of Fame, definitely one of the best drops i've read so far in a while....
...besides my own work and others.
-Mr. Multie