real nice shit kirk...you had some really dope lines....and I loved the length of it...it was perfect..you didn't try to do too much...and yet...your transitions were so smooth that i wasn't left thinking that there needs to be more...you also had a pretty good rhyme scheme...with a few multis here and there...which made the flow damn near perfect....i really liked you're opener...it set the tone for the rest of the piece...and beneath that opener...as i said...are extremely relevant and well crafted lines that conveyed your message brilliantly........and than...the closer....talk about quotables....that shit is sig worthy....i would wear that like a badge of honor my friend....good shit.

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