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Old 06-28-08, 03:11 PM   #9
Adam
 
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it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
Whack, easy and weak punch.
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
Just 'cause his name is Flight doesn't mean you should used played out concepts.
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
No good.
i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over
It's a good concept, but not really a hard hitting line.
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
The concept was good but it was way to forced.

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Flight
fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
Not bad.
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
Sick wordplay, nice punch.
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
Good concept, seemed a little forced.
see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life
Nah
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
Hahahaha, I laughed, good punch.


This wasn't close at all, it was pretty one sided. Played out concepts and bad wording Vs. Fresh ideas and well worded punches.

Vote: Fresh ideas and well worded punches. I mean Flight
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