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Old 06-28-08, 10:43 PM   #10
p4ntzistheish
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Throwin a vote in this.

Format

it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week

Meh.

fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th

Wording is weird but the thought was decent.

peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind

Nice. Gettin better.

i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over

Okay. Not bad

f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top

Nice close. It hit and was personal.



Flight

fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads

Meh start.

read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one

Once again, meh.

fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'

Ha. Clever.

see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life

Okay.

so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters

Bad close.

OVERALL:

I gotta give it to Format. Though Flight's verse was a little easier to read, the content read was better on Format. The battle was very close, but the big close from Format put him ovet the top in my eyes. For both battlers flow and form could use mose work, that wouldn't fly against the better ups in the league. Decent, enjoyable battle from both and I look forward to more.

VOTE: Format
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