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Old 06-29-08, 09:29 AM   #10
El Taco
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You're no Challenger. Just ain't up to Caliber with my jots, man.
I shoot the punches like Magnums too quick for your Dodge, Ram,
^worded nicely, solid.
Guy rams boy dicks. Don't play games? You sit on the joystick,
You're the gayest dude I've ever come across... Who enjoyed it.
^ehhhhhhh
Honestly, bro. You get on pussy. Why? Simple, you must suck,
Because last time you hit a g spot, they beat you the fuck up.
^haha, solid.
Rolls with bitches. My crew? We're the Horsemen, Cee remembers,
Cause I've seen you spit our name out... Missin' the first 3 letters.
^haha
What's your gameplan? Come chargin' at me hopin' to score?
I got a remedy for Ram's tactics...... Just open the door,
^not feelin' it, at all...
Wish you'd drop first for inspiration so you could save my spit,
Cause I could read your fucking verse and it would make me sick,
^ha, simple though
Ram ain't gangster doin' jail time. Please let this noise end,
The only one who's clarified you're inmate is your boyfriend.
^haha, alright
And Ya sig. must be anticipating your anger when this gay gets sank,
Cause if I flip up my finger after this battle. It's what place I ranked.
^meh, decent closer

^^overall, decent verse, stayed fairly consistent though the verse, minus a couple lines which didn't really seem to fit in, solid drop.

kirk fuck it man..I don’t know any good nameplays to stomp it
but it surely rolled off my tongue…a lot quicker then ur mom did
^haha, solid.
shit, I could do this with my eyes closed, cuz damn dis gay aint Hot
After this ill get labelled: Easy……for sleeping my way to the Top
^nah
ill make ya eyes roll to the back of ya skull, when I spit this just right
n then u wont just look stupid…ull even know what stupid looks like
^had potential, didn't connect
yeah I don’t fuck around, but hey! white ass, is perfect for Squashing
so ima leave ya whole fukin crew…looking like a pedestrian crossing
^not feelin it
Ima keep stomping, cuz u cant run with da pros, u shoulda no showed
cus the last time this bitch tried to run Hot…his bath tub, over flowed
^basic
no homo, u aint wanted in this league, kirk your styles a Fucking Joke
cats only paying u respects…cuz your verse resembled, a Suicide Note
^no
so plz don’t, underestimate what I wrote, ill crush all ya Rookie hopes
but of course u stand a chance kirk… im only known for droppin Dopes
^i didn't like the wording, had potench though
see id treat his verse like rubbish, but that wont severely hurt dis clown
plus the instructions left below it, suggest we simply…..burn it down
^didn't like the wording, basic anyways

^^overall, i though ramcees didn't quite drop that well, to me, nothing really connected too hard, or left me saying "shit, nice haha", it was an alright read, but it was basic at best....

v/kirk, harder hitting punches overall
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