yeah thanks for all your kind words. I feel the rhyme scheme is rather easy to follow and the way inwhich it was written is actually how i like to do it.but yeah people in the past have told me that the way i write them can be a bit confusing. word keep them coming

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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
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