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Old 07-04-08, 10:44 AM   #6
JTR
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new bitch, bottom of the list... you better come with something hot
when the mag doesn't mention you at all.. its obvious you're going under, dog
gotta appreciate the irony, watch me break and bash this bum
cause while no one's ever heard of L... i'm about to fucking hand him one
but i'll give you some hope alright? gotta show some love
you just may end up taking flight... after i fucking smack ya around enough

vs.

*sigh* Here we go, first battle I've had in a while,
But I can afford to be shit when I'm up against a pile,
Better luck next time mate, we're boys so please take this beating light,
I'll save you some trouble, cuz I served my own nuts on this Flight...

Flight your whole verse was consistent there was other shit i could have qouted but i just barely didnt... LFS ur opener and closer were dope but you gotta work on your wordig and rhyme scheme man and then you'll be better

v/Flight
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